Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Glenys Character Descriptions

We have been learning what makes great character descriptions.  Here are some we wrote about our teacher, Glenys.
We have been commenting on each others writing - you might like to check out our feedback.


Anawhata All Stars said...

You have done some excellent writing!
Your descriptions are very detailed and have created a picture in my head about Glenys.

Keep up the good work room 6.

Mrs Edwards-Knauf

Room A4 said...

Hi SPS Superstars
We are a Year One class from Papatoetoe East Primary School. We have been looking at your blog and we really like it. We also have a classroom blog where we publish our work.

We hope that when we are Year 3 students that we will be able to write great stories like yours!