We have been learning what makes great character descriptions. Here are some we wrote about our teacher, Glenys. We have been commenting on each others writing - you might like to check out our feedback.
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Anonymous
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You have done some excellent writing! Your descriptions are very detailed and have created a picture in my head about Glenys.
Hi SPS Superstars We are a Year One class from Papatoetoe East Primary School. We have been looking at your blog and we really like it. We also have a classroom blog where we publish our work.
We hope that when we are Year 3 students that we will be able to write great stories like yours!
2 comments:
You have done some excellent writing!
Your descriptions are very detailed and have created a picture in my head about Glenys.
Keep up the good work room 6.
Mrs Edwards-Knauf
Hi SPS Superstars
We are a Year One class from Papatoetoe East Primary School. We have been looking at your blog and we really like it. We also have a classroom blog where we publish our work.
We hope that when we are Year 3 students that we will be able to write great stories like yours!
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